Balanced Eternity
Lights and darks
inside us all
Embrace the strong
embrace the weak
Embrace the joy
embrace the sorrow
Love the snow
and love the sun
Run with passion
walk with purpose
Inside of us
is everything
we are complicated
we are unique
we are balanced
Your picture does a good job connecting to the poem and provides a strong visual representation that allows readers to further comprehend.
ReplyDeleteI really like the imagery you use in this! I like the 3rd stanza a lot
ReplyDeleteThe message is really clear. GREAT JOB LAUREN YAYA
ReplyDeleteThe poem's message was really clear without you having to state it obviously. The image really enhances the understanding too. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThis embodies the concept of Yin & Yang quite well. The plain contradictions show the interlocked balance excellently.
ReplyDeleteI really like your repetition and contrast throughout your poem. Your word choice was very powerful and your picture really captures your message.
ReplyDeleteI really love the simplicity of you poem because that is what makes it stand out so much! Your comparison of learning to enjoy both sides of the same idea adopts the Tao style well.
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