Nice line rhythm.
The way there is only one word in most lines really portrays emphasis on them, and the point of your poem! I really enjoyed reading this poem (:
Great job! I interpreted the poem as describing the Dao and how you portray the Dao as. The one word lines gave it a great effect!
Nice line rhythm.
ReplyDeleteThe way there is only one word in most lines really portrays emphasis on them, and the point of your poem! I really enjoyed reading this poem (:
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I interpreted the poem as describing the Dao and how you portray the Dao as. The one word lines gave it a great effect!
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