accept what you can’t change
let what you can’t change fall into place like pieces to a puzzle
when you try to change it its like changing the meaning of a puzzle
the intensity or the difficulty of the situation is changed
accepting the change is like letting the water droplets
naturally cover up the holes in a ground
naturally letting the change happen is destiny
Letting the change happen is the natural thing
like the last piece of a puzzle naturally knowing its place
accepting what you can’t change is the way of the Dao
You use really distinct metaphors here! I really like the one about the water droplets, and the puzzle metaphor pulls the whole poem together. Nice!
ReplyDeleteWow, really love the metaphors in your poem! They create such a detailed mental image in my mind. The poem flows together so nicely. Great job!
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