Wind is the Tao
Blowing calmly
When you try to go beyond it
It becomes a tornado
A calamity
Wave is the Tao
flowing smoothly
When you try to exceed it
It becomes a hurricane
A catastrophe
Nothing can overpower the Tao
If you challenge it
You will feel the wrath of the universe
You find yourself in chaos
Let the course of nature
Run on the railroad
The universe built
I really like the motif where you start two stanzas similarly. It flows well and has nice imagery.
ReplyDeleteYour last stanza is really good, it really captures the trust and patience you must have when following the Tao!
ReplyDeleteI like how each stanza leads smoothly into the next one.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how there is repetition in your first two stanzas because it really captures what you are trying to say in a unique way.
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