Reflection is the key to integrity
Reflection within, Reflection
about, Reflection following
The sun reflects on the ocean
As we reflect in a mirror
Every movement reflects
ourselves
Every movement reflects
another
Measured movements are better
than negligent ones
Calculations are necessary
before a math problem can be solved
Without precision comes
errors,
Without accuracy comes
oversights.
Every movement reflects
another
Every movement reflects
ourselves
Reflection within, Reflection
about, Reflection following
Reflection is the key to
integrity
I loved the repetition at the beginning and end- it really reinforces your main idea. I also really enjoy your image: it works well with the theme of reflection. :)
ReplyDeleteThe whole poem had such beautiful imagery! As soon as I read it, it just calmed me down! and made me feel relaxed. It is a very soothing poem, and your choice of words and your use of space is very creative.
ReplyDeleteThe picture fits your poem really well! It really enhances your meaning. I love the metaphors and ending too they convey the meaning well.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the analogy of mirroring and how it connects to your theme of self-reflection. I think It really works.
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